Monday, September 16, 2013

The Girl With The Torch


Once upon a time, there were 3 best friends. Leila, Aaron, and Charlotte. They always be together everywhere they went. One day, Charlotte died mysteriously, when she was 10 years old. Leila and Aaron were very sad with her death, but finally learnt to move on.
         10 years later, Leila and Aaron became explorers. They already lived with adventurous trait since they were little, so they became real adventurers when they grew up. They had been to Kenya, Amazon, Nepal, and other places. Leila and Aaron went home to Chicago when they already lost most of their moneys, but they heard about the unexplored forest around Mississippi.
          “Maybe it’ll be a great adventure!” Aaron said. He tried to convince Leila who was so worried about their financials.
          “Yeah, I’m sure It’ll be great. But we have no money, Aaron!” Leila said.
          “Maybe we can hitch hiking. We’ll ask for hippies to bring us to the forest with their peace sign van. Then we’ll go on foot.” Aaron said. Leila reconsidered and realized it wasn’t a bad idea, so she approved Aaron’s idea and the next morning they prepared to ask some people to bring them to a forest in Mississippi called Grimm Forest.
          A nice man allowed them to piggyback on his truck, but asked them to sit in the back. He was surprised when Aaron told him their destination was Grimm Forest, but immediately hid the expression.
          “Well, here we go.” The man said after the truck stopped in front of a dark forest. It was still midday but the big tall trees in the forest made it looked so dark.
          “Thank you, mister. We really appreciate it.” Leila said. The man drove away as Leila and Aaron entered the forest with a compass and a map.
          About an hour later, at the middle of the forest, the compass suddenly fell from Leila’s backpack and it broke. The compass was no longer in use and the map Aaron printed from the internet was very confusing. And suddenly the sky went dark and there were thunders everywhere, not a minute later the rain fell to the forest. Leila and Aaron immediately ran to find some tree for shelter, but they didn’t find any. They were lost and wet.
          In the middle of that hazy situation, Leila saw a light from the far, but the light immediately vanished. Suddenly when she and Aaron turned around, there was a girl with a red cloak and a torch on her right hand stood next to them. They were so surprised!
          “Are you alright?” The girl asked. Her voice was very warm but also weird. Her face was covered by the cloak. “I saw you had a problem with the rain. Looking for shelter?” The girl asked again, now with more friendly tone.
          “Actually, yes. Can you help us? We’re lost.” Leila said. The girl nodded.
          “Sure. Follow me and we’ll go to my house.” She said. She turned around and started to walk away. Leila and Aaron immediately follow. Aaron noticed something weird from her. The torch. It was rainy and the fire kept dancing on the torch like an eternal fire. But Leila, who was worried about the cold that might attacked her and Aaron, ignored it and kept following the strange girl.
          Finally, a house was seen. The girl walked a little faster and finally stopped on the porch of the house.
          “This is my house. Make yourself comfortable.” She said. She hung her torch on the wall of her house. Then she got in. Leila and Aaron followed her.
          The house was purely a forest house, made from the woods. There was a fireplace around the corner. The girl made two cups of hot chocolate for them. After that, she uncovered herself from the cloak. Her brown hair was flowing like an angel’s hair and her face was very pretty. She wore a simple dress and a pair of boots.
          “Thank you.” Leila said. She immediately drank the hot chocolate to get away from the cold. “My name is Leila, this is Aaron.” Leila and Aaron shook hands with the girl. But she refused to tell her name and kept silent. After Aaron looked at her very carefully, her face reminded him of someone he couldn’t remember.
          They didn’t have any conversation. The girl just sat on the chair opposite to Leila and Aaron. Her face showed an emptiness and her skin was very pale. She put her left hand on the table. When Aaron saw her fingers, he was so shocked! There was something on her finger, a flower ring. And Aaron suddenly remembered, he made exactly the same ring to his and Leila’s late friend, Charlotte!
          Aaron became nervous and confused. The girl, noticed Aaron, starred at him. Suddenly her face’s skin tore up and exposed her flesh. Her hazel eyes turned white and her whole skin turned into the same form like her face. Water suddenly ran down from her head and from other body parts. All of her hair fell off and also her head skin.
          “Leila,” Aaron shook Leila’s shoulder nervously. She comfortably drank her chocolate and didn’t notice what the girl had become. “Look.” She looked into Aaron then to the girl. She was so terrified until she dropped her cup and the chocolate spoiled everywhere. The girl opened her mouth and tore it up to her ears.
          “Aaa!!!” Leila and Aaron shouted. They immediately ran away from the house and left their things behind. The forest became very dark after the rain. Leila and Aaron ran as far as possible and didn’t look back. When they felt they already ran far enough, they looked back.
          “She’s gone, right?” Leila asked, terrified. Aaron nodded because he saw the girl wasn’t there. But suddenly, he noticed a light from the far, but vanished immediately. Then he looked left, and saw the girl stood there with its scary form and a torch on her hand.
          “Are you alright?” She asked. Blood started to spoil from her mouth.
          “Aaaaa!!!!” Leila and Aaron shouted. Just when they about to ran away, the girl threw her torch and burnt every trees around them. Leila and Aaron were stuck there and the girl approached to them with a limping leg.
          “Don’t you miss me?” She asked. Leila and Aaron didn’t listen to her because they were too scared to answer a question from the dead. “Don’t you miss me?!” She yelled. Leila and Aaron encouraged themselves to look at the girl, and saw the scary girl has transformed into a lovely little girl. Charlotte.
          “Charlotte?” Leila stuttered. Aaron also looked at the girl. Charlotte smiled. “Don’t you miss me?” She asked. Leila and Aaron began to cry with regrets. The girl was the dead Charlotte, who didn’t die in a happy way. She wandered and waited for Leila and Aaron to reunite with her before she really left. Leila hugged Charlotte, followed by Aaron. Charlotte transformed again into a scary girl, but Leila and Aaron didn’t care. As long they knew it was Charlotte. They released their hug and noticed the girl had the torch back on her hand. “Goodbye.” Then the scary Charlotte hit them with the torch and they passed out.
           Leila and Aaron awoke in a hospital. A nurse told them they were found collapsed on the main road of the forest. After they recovered, they wanted to investigate the real death of their beloved friend, Charlotte. And finally, it was revealed that Charlotte died after her she was drowned in the river of Grimm Forest. That’s why Leila and Aaron never attend Charlotte’s funeral, because there was no funeral at all. Charlotte drowned on the river and her body disappeared. She haunted the forest while she waiting on Leila and Aaron to came for one last goodbye. She was called “The Girl with The Torch.” Many explorers went to the forest, and stuck in a storm when a red-cloaked girl appeared with a torch. She took them to her house, and she expressed her pain there to them before she killed them.